Initial Ideas

Ok there were a few ideas that we thought of for our thriller film. 

Idea 1: The first of the ideas carries on from our thriller film that involved a loan shark. A women doesn't have the money to pay back the loan shark, so he pays her a visit giving her a warning and a dead line for her to get the money to him. The women must then go out find a way to earn the money to pay him back, the thrilling part is she only has 8 hours to get the money. The problem with this story is there is too much dialogue and because we have no professional actors the acting was terrible, unless we find someone that can act decent i don't think we will be able to do this storyline.

The second idea was to make a thriller slash horror, it would be a sort of combination with 2 films sarority row and scream. At this point we decided to have the end at the start. We would show someone running from the house, crying upset and afraid. She runs to the car and struggles to get in as she's in a rush and panicking. She gets in the car and as she tries to start it she drops the keys, as she picks up the keys she looks in the centre mirror and sees a killer in the back seat and screams. There we do a graphic match a girl looking in a mirror, and a sound bridge of the scream to be a scream coming from a film on the television. The girl is part of a slumber party, the girl puts the mirror on the side and sees out the window a mysterious figure under a lamp post across the street. Someone walks past and the figure disappears. At this point the main character thinks nothing of it so takes the vodka of the side and begins to poor out a drink, as she's looking down at the drink while she pours the figure appears at the window, at this point  we jump cut to the title of the film.

The third and final idea that we had was basically the second idea but with a few changes. Once again we show the end at the start, but this time the ending is slightly different. We show a person running away in the dark down streets and ally ways, this is when we show the opening credits. After this point it switches to the rest of idea 2 where she gets to her car nd as she tries to start it she drops the keys, as she picks up the keys she looks in the centre mirror and sees a killer in the back seat and screams. There we do a graphic match a girl looking in a mirror, and a sound bridge of the scream to be a scream coming from a film on the television. The girl is part of a slumber party, the girl puts the mirror on the side and sees out the window a mysterious figure under a lamp post across the street. Someone walks past and the figure disappears. At this point the main character thinks nothing of it so takes the vodka of the side and begins to poor out a drink, as she's looking down at the drink while she pours the figure appears at the window, at this point  we jump cut to the title of the film. Both these ideas are similar but we thought they were both good and could not decide on which one we should do.

This is me and members of my group discussing what we could do for our thriller film on facebook inbox.